name:
gender:**
objective：to exercise work in company
time:xx.02.01—xx.03.15
education：xx.07—now studying in commercial college in guangxi university for nationalities, major is international economic and trade;
xx.06—now studying thai language in bansomdejchaopraya rajabhat university.
personal: nationalities: chinese
age: **
address: **********
tel: *************
e-mail:*************
language: thai language: excellence english: well
computer: windowxx, window officexx, photoshop cs etc.
activities:
★writing, reading ,photographing;
★liking play football, tennis, ping-pong etc;
★be interested in research and survey, had ever organized a team and gone to several villages to survey about the building a new socialist countryside twice in wuming county, guangxi province.
experience:
★xx.09-xx.07 i was a director of the club of computer and internet, was an excellence reporter in university, and had ever published more than 40 pieces of news and other articles thought websites and newspapers of guangxi university for nationalities;
★xx.07-xx.09 once organized a team went to several villages twice in summer holiday and awarded “provincial excellent person” of “culture, science and sanity” summer social practice sponsored by junior and senior college students in guangxi province ;
★xx.03-xx.03 once was the chief of the reporter team in commercial college of guangxi university for nationalities;
★xx.03-xx.06 once joined the 10th national challenge cup competition for academic and scientific achievements among university students, and awarded the second class in guangxi province.
xiao yong he
rm. 2, 4f, sun tong plaza, 1368 huanhai rd (w)
(021) 64335892 email:
objective
english assistant position at a multinational company in shanghai.
experience
x x x co., ltd., shanghai 2000-present executive assistant to head of factory
responsibilities include prioritizing appointment schedules and travel arrangements for the head of factory, managing confidential files and records, doing english and japanese interpretation in business talks, and supervising and training clerical staff.
x x x network, inc., shanghai 1998-2000 executive assistant to vice manager
responsibilities included scheduling appointments, keeping files, and traveling to europe to make advance arrangements for client conferences and extensive client contact.
x x x publishing company, shanghai 1995-1998 office assistant
responsibilities included word processing, data entry, filing, and sometimes bookkeeping.
education
x x x training center, shanghai 1999
completed course of computer typing skills, shorthand, computerized accounts, and manual bookkeeping.
x x x college of continuing education, shanghai 1998
completed one-year japanese course
x x x college of shanghai 1991-1995
majored in english for business, obtained ba
business skills
★ familiar with english accounting and bookkeeping
☆ fluent in oral and written english
★able to communicate in japanese
☆ computer skills in window xp
★ typing speed of 80 wpm
☆ good organizational skills
★ experience of bilingual interpretation
references available on request
education
university of michigan
may 2014
bachelor of arts
ann arbor, mi
english and spanish double major
gpa 3.89/4.00
semester abroad in spain at the universidad de sevilla
winter 2012
new england literature program collaborative learning experience in maine
summer 2011
teaching
palma (proyecto avance: latino mentoring association)
sept. 2012 - present
experience
tutor
tutored third grade latino student weekly in mathematics and english reading and writing
mentored student in negotiating social borders between school and home communities
thompson middle school
sept. 2011 - dec. 2012
pre student teacher- 7th grade english
southfield, mi
co-taught original lesson plan on poetry with an emphasis on creative writing for two classes ofpredominantly low-income students, differentiating instruction between intensive studies classand primarily special education class
worked one-on-one with special education students falling behind in class, including studentswith autism and adhd
grandville high school youth summer stock
summer 2010 - 2011
director/coordinator/creator
grandville, mi
wrote and directed original theatre production for 15+ upper elementary students
led team of 10 peers in execution of extensive annual summer day camp program
adapted daily activities and schedule to changing needs of active participants
america reads
jan. 2009 - apr. 2010
tutor
detroit, mi
planned and executed unique and inpidualized lesson plans twice weekly for three 3rd gradestudents
mentored inner-city detroit students struggling with literacy and various other academic andsocial issues
additional
basement arts
sept. 2012 - present
experience
director (harvey and 24
情况简介（注：本案例中的姓名为化名）
看了张源的简历，对于其目前的状况、做过些什么、能做些什么、有些什么能力和特长没有任何概念，但通过与她的交流，得知其人与所应聘的职位其实是非常匹配的，职位所要求的任职资格“qualifications”她都具备：
虽然张源具备了以上职位广告中提出的任职资格，但在简历中却未能够突显出来，因此，这样一份简历不能够吸引招聘人员的眼球，很可能第一关就被淘汰出局了。这份英文简历非常不专业，显得很幼稚，出现了很多错误：
①撰写英文简历，要遵循“user-friendly”原则，要处处替简历阅读者着想，为对方创造便利。hr每天要给数十名候选人打电话约见面试，手机号码的写法需规范，这份简历遵循了4－3－4的原则，方便拨打。但忽略固定电话则不应该。另外，还应该增加联系地址信息。（若是跨城市找工作，没有当地联系地址，则不写地址信息：因为若不是急需人才，用人单位可能会考虑到交通成本问题而不给面试机会。）
②③④⑤是求职意向。这份英文简历写成这样，很明显是在海投，没有度身定制。②表明求职者正在找全职工作。③期望行业，建议一份简历只写一种，不要出现“etc”（等等）字眼，更何况出现拼写错误。④若非跨地区求职，可不必特别注明期望地点，若是大型跨国公司，可以注明一下，用人单位会尽量考虑你的期望。⑤“negotiable”（薪酬可议）这句话相当于没写。显然，这是受到一些在线简历模版的影响，若是定制个性化英文简历，建议不要采用这些简历模板，而应取长补短。
⑥若非招聘广告特别注明，不必随同简历发送照片。公司招人主要看求职者知识、技能，看你毕业的学校和专业，看你接受过什么样的培训，参加过哪些项目，做过哪些工作。不要寄希望凭借外貌增加hr好感。如果公司明确要求附照片，则照办不误。
⑦工作经历部分写得太简单，标题出现拼写错误“extra-curriculars”。我想求职者在这里是想表示“课外活动”的意思，那么可以用“extracurricularactivities”，如果拿不准，可以用“experience”或者“socialwork”等简单词语代替。另外语言实在太简单了，没有有效展示自己。
⑧所获荣誉部分出现了拼写错误。如“activities”容易拼错，“top10literaturalpace-setter”我想求职者可能是指“十佳标兵”，但此处“literatural”是杜撰的词语，想说得简单点，可用“top10beststudents”来表示，其实是十个最优秀的学生之一嘛，不过就是中文词汇丰富了些，变换了说法而已。
⑨列出的课程过多，可将它们移至教育背景栏目下，并简单列出与应聘职位相关的课程，像“hotelmanagement”之类的就没必要提了。
⑩自我评价非常主观，用人单位其实要看你具体做了些什么。张源却把很多精力放在这里，寄希望全面展示优点，显然，这种想法是错误的。首先，这部分使用了大段文字，占据很大比重，无法引起hr的兴趣和注意力。要想抓住hr眼球，千万不要长篇大论，最好用简短有力的关键词和点句。简历中不应出现第一人称代词，这样显得不专业。如果你是与面试官面对面的交流，可以使用“i”、“we”等，但简历不应该出现“i”、“my”等字词，同时也应尽量减少非实义词语如代词、助词的出现频率。
这份英文简历没有经过精雕细琢，格式、字体不够统一，拼写错误时常出现，这样的简历在招聘人员看来，首先是态度问题，然后是能力问题，被淘汰是在所难免的。
当然，这份英文简历最失败的地方就在于没把能力充分展现出来，无法向招聘人员证明自己的能力，不能够说服招聘人员约见自己。在撰写简历时，如果能仔细研究招聘广告，当我们与所应聘的职位匹配程度越高，胜出的几率也就越大。
为什么要进行这样的修改呢？我们一一阐释：
①撰写英文简历时，开头就清楚地标明姓名及联系方式。hr看简历时，先看工作经历、学术背景，觉得差不多可以约见面试了，才看个人信息，
②英语地址写法应遵循由小到大的原则，正好与中文的反过来，先写××房间，××号，然后再写××路，××市，邮编，××省，国名。邮编的标准写法是放在市名之后，也可以放在省名之后，但一定要放在china之前。 ③把求职意向写得明确一些，让招聘人员明白你正在寻找什么职位。也可以紧跟着证明自己能够胜任这份工作的能力和资格。④简历栏目不宜过多，一般不超过五个，否则显得凌乱。在所学课程之下，罗列相关课程，如这里列出市场营销、管理学、商务英语等课程，能从增强阅读者对求职者的立体感。⑤⑥⑦是工作经验部分，遵循从最近工作经验写起的原则。在经历描述中，有详有略，最近经历要重点阐述，用人单位最感兴趣的是你目前正在做的，对于过去，兴趣会降低许多；相关经历要多写。⑤与目标职位最为接近，要对照目标职位的描述挖掘曾经做过的工作；⑥展示了英文水平；而⑦说明人际交流和沟通能力。每个工作描述所展示的技能都与目标职位息息相关。⑧根据任职要求有针对性地罗列技能，包括语言、计算机技能。张源在简历中没有提到自己的中文水平，比较遗憾。另外提到日语会话能力，增色不少。⑨在与张源沟通后发现的较有特色的兴趣爱好及特长。不具体的爱好和特长不写，以免在简历中留下话柄，面试中将会陷自己于不利的境地。例如，一般人喜欢说自己爱好读书、旅游、音乐等，假如面试官也是个音乐爱好者，与你攀谈起来，就露馅了。张源喜欢弹吉他和跳健美操，曾作为领队带领健美操队在校年度晚会上表演过，这一点使形象更加丰满。
personal information
name: wang bin
sex: male
date of birth: july 12, 1971
address: room301, dormitory20, lanzhou university, lanzhou, gansu, 730000, china
telephone: +86-931-8912xxx; +86-136931xxxx
e-mail:
education
9/2005 - present lanzhou university
candidate for master in economics in june, 2009
major in corporate finance, school of economics
ranked 2/45 in class, core gpa: 3.3/4
9/2001 - 6/2005 lanzhou university
bachelor in economics
awarded national excellent undergraduate student scholarship
experience
7/ - 11/2006 summer team: expand job channels for students
got in touch with 10 companies, visited 4 companies and found their talent demands
made agreements with 4 companies that they would recruit graduates in lanzhou university
10/2006 – 1/2007 volunteer teacher for the hongshan school in lanzhou
taught the course of english for the rural workers ’ children in the school
academic capability
fluent in english. cet-6 : 85.5; toefl ( ibt ) : 98; gre: 1380
graded 2 of gansu computer rank examination for university students
be proficient in office automation ( microsoft excel, powerpoint ) and web surfing
publications
the influence of economic densities of city propers on the infrastructure investment by local governments published in science and engineering research, 2005, 2
receptionist(general)
sandy lin 15/f,tower2,bright china,building1,beijing.
qualifications:
over 25 years secretarial/administrative experience.
p align=left>skills:typing (65 wpm),-line phones/switchboard,ten key (110 kspm) digital decmate computer,bookkeeping,credit checks,statistical typing.
extensive business experience including accounting firms,legal firms,financial firms,insurance companies,transportation companies,medical environments,government agencies and non-profit groups.
offer common sense,ability to take initiative,quality orientation and the ability to see a job thorough.
outstanding communications skills...extremely hardworking and dedicated.
employment:
marston convent,laramie,wy,1988-present
receptionist
answer phone,greet visitors and provide information,tours,and and monitor thank-you notes for all received m light typing,filling,and word processing.
wyoming public television,laramie,wy,1987-88
telemarketer
solicit red the ordering of informative pamphlets,placards,buttons,tee-shirts,etc.
rinaldo ranch,laramie,wy,1983-88
secretary
provided word processing,customer relations,some accounts payable ented new system for check processing,increased prompt payment of client bills.
womanpower inc.,laramie,wy,1975-83
secretary
acted as liaison between public and ceo.
state health coalition,laramie,wy,1965-75
statistical typist
prepared health record documentation of infectious disease patients at state d training of new hires.
education:
training,inc.,boston,ma,1965
an office careers training program in bookkeeping,typing,reception,
word processing,and office procedures.
's academy,portland,maine
high school diploma
objective is unnecessary because resume illustrates a clear career path.
work history is stated in reverse chronological order,with most recent employment listed first.
personal information
name
gender: male
date of birth: 1971-6-20
residency: shanghai
work experience: >10 years
address: gudai road
zip code: 201102
mobile: 139*********
home tel: 086-021-********
current salary: **********rmb /year
career objective
i have 10 years work experience in sales and at least 8 years experience in a managerial position in a fast-paced growth environment. i deeply understand the chinese market and realities. i have full of experience in marketingsalesdistributor manager, and have strong leadership capabilities, able to manage a large sales team. i have strong work responsibility and can travel frequently.
work experience
2005/03--presenthengtai consumables group shanghai henglian trade co.,ltd
position: sales center sales manager of center
ethnic: chinese political face: the masses
academic qualifications (degree): college profession: secretary
phone: 12345678 mobile phone: 139 ********
contact address: xx street, chaoyang district, beijing on the 10th zip: 100001
email address: pager: 010 -********- 1234
educational background
graduate institutions:
secretary of beijing institute of 1997.9 - 1999.7 secretarial profession
specialties:: secretary of practice, theory and practice conference, document writing, document processing, archival science, office coordination, computer and modern office equipment, the basic theory, finance, financial, tax, legal, business english, computer english input, editing, typesetting, tabulation, shorthand, calligraphy, english typing and so on.
other: other training
* beijing have received training in etiquette school system
* proficiency in office software, office and other modern office equipment, typing proficiency
* day-to-day communication can be conducted in english, have good listening and speaking ability.
work experience
* 1999.8 --- xx import and export corporation has front reception and secretarial
front desk reception work and office administrative work, a serious and responsible work has been leading praise and colleagues
profile
character i cheerful, generous, have a good knowledge of etiquette and hospitality work experience, skills, flexibility, quick response, flexibility in handling emergencies. i think that represents the front desk reception work the company's image, although the ordinary but very important job, so to do a good job in the future work required to receive a strong sense of responsibility. i am willing to work with your co-development and progress.
please give me a chance, i will also brilliant luster you!
i character
cheerful, modest, self-discipline, self-confidence (based on the person's circumstances).
another: the most important thing is the ability, i believe that your company will feel that i am a suitable candidate for this position!
look forward to working with your interviews!
sandy lin 15/f,tower2 ,bright china,building1,beijing.
skills:
typing 65+wpm.
strong knowledge of general accounting procedures.
ability to work under pressure in a fast-paced environment and manage multiple tasks.
ability to work independently with good organizational and communication skills.
experience working for a large corporation.
professional appearance and attitude.
experience:
1989-present carter trust
office clerk
transcribe statements form insureds,type letters to attorneys,insureds,and other insurance timely payment of worker's compensation checks and the timely filing of workers' compensation forms;type confidential material such as employee appraisals for the claims ive workload on ibm 3090 processing insurance claims,payments,and recovery checks to insureds and telephone inquiries from insureds,claimants,and agents.
1985-1989 federal union insurance co.
clerical supervisor
supervised the clerical staff consisting of three clerical in the capacity of administrative to the claims manager,typed letters to attorneys,insureds,etc.,and handled special projects and reports from the boston office.
1981-1985 mapleroot high school
payroll clerk
handled a monthly payroll for 500 hourly ed quarterly federal withholding tax returns and labor statistics report.
education:
h.s. diploma
certificate in wordperfect 5.1
certificate in lotus 1-2-3
computers:
wordperfect 5.1,lotus 1-2-3,e-mail,ibm system
references:
furnished upon request.
skills section focuses employer's attention on candidate's relevant qualifications.
work experience is emphasized,while limited education is de-emphasized
self-evaluation
dignified, prudent, responsible care; one-year working experience in the future, the flexibility to adapt to different environment, a good collaboration.
personal information
name: linyuan sex: female age: 24 years old
e-mail: xxxxxxxxxx tel: xxxxxxx
address: xxx road, haidian district, beijing zip code xxx no.: xxxxxx
work experience
august 2000 - the company now xxxx future scientific and technical information clerks
duties:
responsible for a variety of business arrangements for the coordination of activities;
group is responsible for answering and forwarding calls, send and receive fax, document finishing, custody;
office supplies procurement and management, office equipment maintenance and repair;
air ticket booking business for the company, document printing, and some logistics;
many independent organizations, the organization of major conferences;
visitors visiting the reception work;
educational background
september 1997 - july 2000 beijing university of science and technology computer application specialist
professional expertise and skills
proficiency in computers, have office2000 and other commonly used office software, typing speed and internet experience;
writing text, and can be used to draft the company documents;
work with strong organizational skills, ability to work independently;
cheerful personality, putonghua standard, can better handle the relationship with others;
a simple communication skills in english.
wage expectations :1500-2000 yuan / month